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SnedekerDesignz says

Some of my files got rejected and the reviewer suggested I post them here and get feedback. So how can I improve these?

(not the best)

I’ll post more as they get rejected.

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SnedekerDesignz says

And three more

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SnedekerDesignz says

Gonna bump this, got lost pretty fast.

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Motionreactor says

Sorry totally missed this thread.

The models look fine. It is the textures that are really needing some more attention. They look like they have been taken straight from a photo without any adjusments. The table looks good, the others look either washed out or have a strong colour cast (the barrels are very green).

Most of the photos have Chromatic Aberration which you will need to fix, or re-source. :(

Perhaps some normal and specular maps? I can’t see any evidence of these. I guess they are not a 100% requirement, but these days they are definitely used extensively.

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SnedekerDesignz says

Thanks. I could do normal maps, I just never had any luck getting stuff that looks good :P

I never noticed the green in the barrels. Ak!! I’ll fix that, lol.

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